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Before the Flame Goes Out-part

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    “H-H-Hi R-R-Rai.” Kimiko said as she inched her way into the kitchen of the Xiaolin Temple she and 2 other chosen ones had come to merely 6 months ago. “Kimi…? Are you okay? You’re shivering like crazy.” Raimundo asked in a concerned tone. Raimundo glanced out the window after he said that. It was a warm spring day. ‘Why on earth is she shivering like crazy’ Raimundo thought. Raimundo was Kimiko’s best friend since they came to the temple. “Y-Y-Yeah. I-I-I’m f-f-fine.” Kimiko said, still shivering as she was about to sit down. She and Raimundo were the only two people in the temple kitchen. “Are you sure?” Raimundo asked. “Y-Y-Yeah. I-I-I’m f-“ Kimiko stuttered before she started to fall backwards. “Kim!” Raimundo yelled as he caught her while she was millimeters away from falling hard on the cold hard floor. ‘ That’s weird,’ Raimundo thought, still holding Kimiko, ‘ her body is all cold. Cold! That’s it!’

    
Master Fung, Clay, Omi, and Raimundo were surrounding Kimiko. We were in her cubicle and Kimiko was in her small bed, cover with blankets her eyes closed, and had a painful look on her face. ‘I hate to see her like this.’  Raimundo thought. Raimundo had told Master Fung and the other what happened to Kimiko. He had carried her bridal style to her cubicle. All three boys had gotten her blankets to keep her warm. “Based on what Raimundo has told us, I suspect that Kimiko’s flame is going out.” Master Fung said, breaking the silence. “What do you mean?” Raimundo asked in a worried tone. “It means, if we don’t find out how to keep Kimiko’s inner fire going, she will die in one moon.” Master Fung answered. ‘Die!’ all three boys thought. “How can we help her, Master Fung sir?” Clay asked. Master Fung closed his eyes and sighed. “I am not sure what we will do Clay.” Master Fung said, in total lost. “There is surely something in the scrolls that will help us.” Omi said, feeling confidant. “No Omi,” Master Fung said “there is nothing that will help us in the scrolls.” “Maybe a shen-gon-wu?” Omi asked sounding less confidant. “No Omi.” Master Fung replied. “How can you be so sure! There has to be something to help Kimi!” Raimundo asked, panicking. The three were staring at Raimundo. “Rai? You okay buddy?” Clay asked. “Yes Raimundo, as Clay would say ‘more jumpier that a dog with a thousand fleas’”. Omi followed. “ Yeah I’m fine! What would make you say that!?” Raimundo said, in a panicked tone, and a jumpy one. “Oh no reason,” Clay said sarcastically, “except that you SHOUTING!” Just as Omi was about to follow, Dojo came in and was carrying the shen-gon-wu-scroll. “Guys, we got a new wu reviled!” Dojo said, before looking at Kimiko. “What’s wrong with Kimiko?” Dojo asked, while coming in inside her cubicle. Master Fung sighed, as if giving Dojo a silent answer. “You mean,” Dojo said as he trailed off. “Yes.” Master Fung replied. “What do you mean?” Raimundo asked before looking at Kimiko ‘She’s my best friend,’ Raimundo thought, ‘I don’t want anything bad to happen to her. Ever’. “Kimiko will turn Heylin in one moon if she doesn’t die,” Master Fung said sadly, “ with her Fire powers, who knows how powerful she will be one the Heylin side.” “Dojo, about the wu.” Omi said, bring it up again. “Oh! Right! It’s called the ‘Heeling Cobra’ with this you could heel anything!” Dojo said. “Hey! Maybe this could help us get Kimiko’s inner flame going!” Raimundo said. “That is only half of the heeling process Raimundo.” Dojo said. “How do you know that Dojo?” Omi asked. “Well before you guys came, Dashi was the Dragon of Water, Chase was the Dragon of Wind, Master Monk Gunan was the Dragon of Earth, and Wuya was the Dragon of Fire, if didn’t catch on. Anyways, Wuya had the same problem, instead of dying she turned Heylin.” Dojo said. “Ohhhh.” Dojo said, we better getting moving, I’m staring to get a rash.” ‘If Kimiko was awake, she would be totally grossed out.’ Raimundo smiled at that thought. For some reason, he felt stronger when ever he was around Kimiko. ‘ Maybe because we were best friends, all my other friends weren’t as close as Kim and me.’ “Raimundo you will stay here and watch Kimiko,” Master Fung said, breaking Raimundo from his thoughts, “while Clay and Omi will go with Dojo to retrieve the shen-gon-wu.” Raimundo wondered if he chose Raimundo to watch Kimiko because he was the leader, or for some other reason he couldn’t put his finger on.’ He looked at Kimiko, she was now smiling, and Raimundo smiled back. ‘She looks so cute when she’s sleeping,’ Raimundo thought. And for the rest of the time the three were gone to get the Heeling Cobra, he though of ways Kimiko could be cured before she dies or becomes Heylin. ‘ I’d rather have her be Heylin than die,’ Raimundo thought, ‘then I could at least see her smile again.’




    
Yays! First upload! Yeah I don't know how I got this idea for this story! I already know how to cure Kimiko! Oh yeah! I don't own any of the characters or Xiaolin Showdown. They belong to Chrisy Hui. ^-^! Enjoy!!!
P.S. I do own the right to be a Raikim luver fan!
I noiced that I accidently repeated it, so I changed it!
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